No need to push
We Lament our life
Together it used to be
Not wot I wanna write but it's all got so outta site tis our plight
Where is our love
Not wot I wanna say but we can't stay together & can't stay apart
Where is our love
We say try just friends but there is so much more we end up fighting
Where is our love
When we speak it turns into wot it wuz before losing our footing
Where is our love
We is arguing an even worse strong emotions come to the fore
Where is our love
What can we do one has gotta stop the blaming an hurting
Where is our love
Wondering will it never end the pain of loss come true in losing you
Where is our love
We gotta treasure our time together cos it won't come round again
Where is our love
Our hands of time stand still we could not make it last & now it's in the past
Where is our love
We must keep on moving proving that it wuz the best thing to do for both me & you
Where is our love
Being friends just tricks us into believing there is hope in there being a home
Where is our love
What we have are two rings mine is on my finger now
Memories are ours to desire
To understand The Dude one must listen to wot I say
It is chaos in a never ending way
But help me focus I'll win every day
In order to stay the Media is the only pay
Cos I love making people smile an play
To show you some comedy is to stay
The Dude
5 comments:
Beautiful poem, Dude.
Dude,
You're a beautiful and sentimental writer.
Thanks Marsha I appreciate yor comments. Jus Writing wot comes into my mind most of the time.
Spelling an grammar are not my strong points tho. Am learning as I go along, I've got Writer on my contact card.
Apart from anyting else it's a bit of fun, an my aim is to communicate 'in the best possible taste'of course lol
All the best The Dude
The beauty of a poem is it's expression and sentiment, not so much it's grammatical correctness. That would only bog it down and take away from the "real" feel of it, don't you think?
That's the awesome thing about poetry, the license toward creativity allowed.
Yep thnx Marsha good point I appreciate yor input the Thai stuff is jus the Thai stuff bragging rights not really taut a lot bout dat. Jus me on vacation being single like.
An das not voluntary [single] Jus worked out dat way.
Namaste The Dude
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